Where Were you

You walked past me today.
I was sitting in front of the store close to where you live. I asked you for bread, but you gave me a stone. I asked you for a drink to quench my thirst, but you gave me a serpent.
Later you pass me again.
I was lying on the sidewalk in pain. I asked you for help but you laughed at me and kicked me then gave me a sword.
Again still you pass me once more i lay motionless on the street. You held up your head and looked straight ahead and passed me by.
Now the years have passed and so have you.
I see you again. You ask me What is my reward? I give you a stone i give you a serpent then i give you a sword.
I turn my back cause I see you no more.

7 Responses to “Where Were you”

  1. i’m here to post a comment..
    Is that a verse from bible?

  2. No but it is something close to it just my interpatation of it

  3. That has something to do with the golden rule right?
    ‘Do unto others as you would have them do unto you.’

    it’s as well as saying,treat others the way you want to be treated..Familiar with BRATZ THE MOVIE?They got a song there that goes like this…

    “whatever you do..comes back to you.Sometimes you make the trouble you’re in”

    (Though it’s a kiddie animation,
    it gives kids something to learn.
    Nice post NYTE.Great interpretation!

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  4. backroadsgirl Says:

    very good!

  5. those verses are really nice..am gonna link u up to mine..

  6. spostareduro Says:

    This was great and I know the feeling all too well.

    Thanks

  7. ty all for your comments i enjoy it when people give me a little feed back

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